In this page, you will find a variety of essay samples corresponding to the BAND 6.0 score. Use these essays as tools to learn, understand and evolve your own writing style for the IELTS examination.
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You recently attended a conference in a different city and stayed at a hotel during your visit. The hotel's services and facilities did not meet your expectations, and you faced some issues during your stay. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, include: - The dates of your stay and your booking details - The problems you encountered during your stay - What actions you would like the hotel to take to address the issues
Dear sir/madam I am writing to express my concern about inconvinence accomodation in your hotel from 17th to 20th October. I was invited to attend a confrence in your city and after spending many hours on the internet and reading a numerous comment on the main websites i selected your hotel which had best rate. So i set my date trip and booked a room with sea view. I was supposed to take your ...
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You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work properly. You called the store but no action was taken. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: - Explain the situation and the equipment you bought - Describe the problem with the equipment - Request appropriate action to be taken
Dear John, I recently bought a pack of kitchen knifes from your store. But the knifes are not sharp enough to cut throw the meat and even some of the knifes are broken. When I see these problems, I call the store and told them the problem and I want a refund for it or replace them with the sharp ones, they said that they will call me back soon but they did not call back so I call again and the ...
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You recently attended a workshop conducted by a company on a new software being implemented in your office. The workshop was helpful but you encountered a few issues during the session. Write a letter to the company that provided the workshop, including the following points: 1. Express gratitude for the workshop 2. Mention the specific issues faced during the session 3. Suggest possible improvements for future workshops 4. Request additional support or materials to help better understand the software Write your letter in a clear, relevant, and coherent manner. Remember to use an appropriate tone and follow the letter-writing format.
Dear manager, I am really happy that I can attend this valuable workshop .I am sure that I can progress in my job by attending this useful workshop of course with your help. But,there are some problems in this workshop that I should say. First of all,some computers do not work well which causes I can not learn well.So it would be great if you consider this issue and solve this problem. Anothe ...
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You recently attended a professional development workshop in another city, which was organized by your company. Write a letter to the workshop organizer to express your appreciation for the event. In your letter: - Describe the workshop and how it was helpful to you - Mention one specific aspect of the event that impressed you the most - Suggest any improvements for future workshops
Dear Mr. Lee Firstly I'd like to thank you for the time you gave me to improve my capabilities, I always try to learn new things and find the ways that change my position in the work. I try to search in the websites and follow the pages which teach useful ways for better working on the social media. Therefore this workshop that I could speak to the people like me was an amazing time to find n ...
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You recently received a large package by courier at your home. Unfortunately, the package was damaged when it arrived, and some of the contents were broken. Write a letter to the courier company. In your letter: - Describe the package and the damage that occurred - Explain the effects the damage had on the contents - Request appropriate compensation for the damaged items
Hello dear Mr thech, Last day, I received my package that transferred by your company and after unboxing I discovered that goods totally have been destroyed. Unfortunately, at this time I can’t evaluate the exact amount of damages. In this package I had a very memorable and priceless stuff which inherited from my grandmother. The tangible and countable value of this legacy is more than 1000$ b ...
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You recently attended a training course in a different city, and you were not satisfied with the accommodation provided by the training institution. Write a letter to the course organizer to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, include the following: - Give details of the course you attended - Describe the problems with the accommodation - Suggest suitable solutions to improve the situation
To whom who may concern I am sajjad fadaei and I attended digital marketing course in chicago. I learnt a lot but meanwhile I was not satisfied with the accommodation service . The air conditioner was broken and I was not able to rest well after the course. Indeed it could be nice to check each room before our arrival. I wanted to add that there is no enough space for storing our belongin ...
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You recently attended a workshop held by your company. In the workshop, a guest speaker gave an informative presentation about effective communication in the workplace. You have decided to write a letter of appreciation to the guest speaker. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and mention the workshop you attended - Explain what you learned during the presentation - Describe how the presentation has positively impacted your work and colleagues - Offer your heartfelt thanks to the guest speaker
Dear Madam I want to talk about workshop. First I should say thanks an ocean for workshop. I think the workshop very useful for us. I started work since 8 years ago and I use to go to a lot of workshop for my progress and I guess it was good for my job. Next I should say I learned a lot of thins in your workshop, for example: ways of sale, responsibility, creativity and so on. The work shop ha ...
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You recently attended a conference in a different city, and you were very impressed with the organization of the event. Write a letter to the conference organizer to express your appreciation. In your letter, you should: - Mention the specific conference you attended - Describe what you liked most about the organization - Suggest any minor improvements you think could be made for future events
Dear medical conference organization I would really appreciate for attending in this medical's surgery conference for sharing up to dated techniques in surgery with intelligence systems. It's amazing conference because we can merge two completely different academic field and create an innovative ways to improve surgeons ability in their career. The most liked about your organization is about ...
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You recently bought a new electronic device online, but after using it for a few days, you encountered some issues with its functionality. Write a letter to the online store where you purchased the device. In your letter: - Describe the device you purchased - Explain the problems you are facing with the device - Request for a refund or a replacement
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I bought a new hair straighter from your store Melal Mal branch , it looks great and we have checked it there it was working perfectly and heat of straighter was super ,after one week when i was on vacation and i need it urgently for styling my hair ,suddenly understand that i cannot straight my hair and i checked it then noticed that it isn't working well , ...
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You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. Upon leaving, you realized you left a personal item in your hotel room. Write a letter to the hotel manager to request their assistance in locating and returning your item. In your letter: - Explain your situation and the item left behind - Provide details about the room you stayed in and the date of your stay - Specify how you would like the hotel to assist you - Suggest arrangements for returning the item to you
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform that I have left my bag in the room when I was leaving. There are not much money but some docs in the wallet. I really assist you to put it in a safe place until I come back . I was in the room 609 in Jan 1st. I was there for three nights. Please if you could post it for me to my address I would be so grateful. Now , I am traveling to other cities and I have ...
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You recently attended a workshop that was organized by an international company in your city. Write a letter to the company manager to express your gratitude for organizing the event. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and mention the details of the workshop - Explain what you enjoyed or learned during the workshop - Suggest any improvements for future workshops
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform my appreciation for the event. It was really appropriate ad suitable for me. I am one of the participants and enjoyed your workshops very much. Firstly, I would like to tell you that I learnt many experiences from the event especially for my job and career as a teacher. I am very interested to attend it again and share my experience to my other colleagues. Fu ...
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You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. However, you were not satisfied with the hotel accommodations and services. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, include: - Details about your stay (booking reference, dates, etc.) - What were the issues you faced during your stay? - What actions do you expect the hotel to take in response to your complaints?
Hi, I'm Tien I am writing this letter to complain about all the issues I had to cope with during my stay at your hotel. First of all is that the walls are too thin, I could hear clearly what the others were doing in the room next door. Not only that, the room was way too dirty when I first got into it, and I had to spend almost an hour just to make it be acceptable. Not to mention, the air co ...