BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK AND REQUESTS AFTER SOFTWARE IMPLEMENTATION WORKSHOP | IELTS LETTER WRITING TASK

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a workshop conducted by a company on a new software being implemented in your office. The workshop was helpful but you encountered a few issues during the session. Write a letter to the company that provided the workshop, including the following points: 1. Express gratitude for the workshop 2. Mention the specific issues faced during the session 3. Suggest possible improvements for future workshops 4. Request additional support or materials to help better understand the software Write your letter in a clear, relevant, and coherent manner. Remember to use an appropriate tone and follow the letter-writing format.

Essay Sample

Dear manager,
I am really happy that I can attend this valuable workshop .I am sure that I can progress in my job by attending this useful workshop of course with your help.
But,there are some problems in this workshop that I should say. First of all,some computers do not work well which causes I can not learn well.So it would be great if you consider this issue and solve this problem.
Another thing that I want to revommand you please bring good proffessors some of them unfortunately can not transfer their knowledge.
Please expand your workshop.with different subjects because it is good for my job too.I want to progress in my job and I really want to attend in these practical workshops.
Also,another thing that I want to mention please bring more computers cause we want to learn more and better thank you in advance.
Best regards,
Parastoo Faghih