BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITE A LETTER TO STORE MANAGER ABOUT FAULTY KITCHEN EQUIPMENT

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work properly. You called the store but no action was taken. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter: - Explain the situation and the equipment you bought - Describe the problem with the equipment - Request appropriate action to be taken

Essay Sample

Dear John,
I recently bought a pack of kitchen knifes from your store. But the knifes are not sharp enough to cut throw the meat and even some of the knifes are broken. When I see these problems, I call the store and told them the problem and I want a refund for it or replace them with the sharp ones, they said that they will call me back soon but they did not call back so I call again and they say they won't replace it with new ones or give me refund.
This problem is need to be fixed by you and take responsibility for selling the faulty equipment. And please contact the manufacture company and tell them to correct equipment so this won't happen to anyone else.
Please can you help me to how can I get refund or replace them with sharp ones.
Please contact me with replying to this email.

Kind regards,
Pouya Bigalri