BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A COMPLAINT LETTER TO COURIER COMPANY ABOUT DAMAGED PACKAGE

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You recently received a large package by courier at your home. Unfortunately, the package was damaged when it arrived, and some of the contents were broken. Write a letter to the courier company. In your letter: - Describe the package and the damage that occurred - Explain the effects the damage had on the contents - Request appropriate compensation for the damaged items

Essay Sample

Hello dear Mr thech,
Last day, I received my package that transferred by your company and after unboxing I discovered that goods totally have been destroyed.
Unfortunately, at this time I can’t evaluate the exact amount of damages.
In this package I had a very memorable and priceless stuff which inherited from my grandmother.
The tangible and countable value of this legacy is more than 1000$ but spiritual value is unconditional.
Well, actually i was waiting eagerly to receive one the precious family legacy but i received a broken one which don’t have any value so its good-for-nothing at all.
At the first step, I want to know who is in charge and who must be responsible for this damage?
At the second step, I want to talk with the answerable one.
At the end I want inform me who and in which time your company will pay back my remedy?
Thanks in advance,
Elahe Sharif