BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: APPRECIATION LETTER TO CONFERENCE ORGANIZER - TIPS AND RECOMMENDATIONS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a conference in a different city, and you were very impressed with the organization of the event. Write a letter to the conference organizer to express your appreciation. In your letter, you should: - Mention the specific conference you attended - Describe what you liked most about the organization - Suggest any minor improvements you think could be made for future events

Essay Sample

Dear medical conference organization
I would really appreciate for attending in this medical's surgery conference for sharing up to dated techniques in surgery with intelligence systems. It's amazing conference because we can merge two completely different academic field and create an innovative ways to improve surgeons ability in their career.
The most liked about your organization is about helding this event in nice and beautiful city and use well-versed examples for transfer the achievement in a good way for anyone whom English is not their mother-tongue language
The other positive point of this event is collaboration between artificial intelligence experts and surgeons for improving health care
The only criticism that I have about conference is about the long last timing of the conference without any interruption in between that is cause tedious for others and can not fully focus on important notes about event.

Thanks for your cares
Saeide Rahmatkhah