In this page, you will find a variety of essay samples corresponding to the BAND 5.5 score. Use these essays as tools to learn, understand and evolve your own writing style for the IELTS examination.
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You recently attended a conference in another city and found out that the conference room had several issues affecting the experience of the attendees. Write a letter to the conference organizer, in which you: 1. Describe the conference you attended. 2. Explain the problems you faced in the conference room. 3. Suggest some improvements that can be made to enhance the conference experience for future events.
Hello I hope you have a good time. To describe the conference, I should tell you that, it was about new psychological research which had been gotten popular by its results. Due to my experience about being a the conference room, Although the lecture was good but the environment wasn't actually satisfied. The air conditioner wasn't working well while the number of audiences were high. On the ot ...
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You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. However, you were not satisfied with the hotel accommodations and services. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, include: - Details about your stay (booking reference, dates, etc.) - What were the issues you faced during your stay? - What actions do you expect the hotel to take in response to your complaints?
Hi, my name is Mohamadreza Jahani . Recently I have stayed in your hotel but I hadn't been satisfied with my accommodation and the services. the hosts weren't polite enough and some of them were so much rude. When i arrived there , there were nobody to carry my suitcases to my room. I carried them myself. My room didn't smell very well and also it was too warm in the room. I thought that it mi ...
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You recently purchased an item online, but when it arrived, you found that it was damaged. Write a letter to the company where you bought the item. Include the following in your letter: - Describe the item that you purchased - Explain the problem with the item - Suggest what you would like the company to do about the issue
Dear sale manager of digikala online shop I regret to inform you avout my last shopping of your onlineshop. I had ordered a mobile phone almost three days ago and it received me yesterday. but after I opened the pack of my purchase, I found my purchase in a bad situation. I investigated it and I found many cracks at the body and screen of it. It seems the defects occur before it packed. furthe ...
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You recently attended a professional conference, and you were highly impressed by one of the guest speakers. Write a letter to the guest speaker expressing your appreciation for their presentation. In your letter, include: - Introduction: Explain who you are and why you are writing - Description: Describe what you enjoyed about the presentation - Impact: Explain how the presentation has benefited you or changed your perspective
Hello there, I am writing a letter to you Ms., Sara to express my gratitude to you. For many years I was working in this field which you had a presentation on last week. It was a great opportunity for me to attend that meeting. It solves many problems for me that were like egos for me. I was wondering if there is an ongoing new season that I could attend next month could you send me an email ...
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You recently visited a local sports center and were disappointed with the lack of services available. Write a letter to the center's manager to express your dissatisfaction, suggest improvements, and request a partial refund. In your letter, be sure to include: 1. A description of the situation and the issues you faced during your visit. 2. Specific suggestions on how the center can enhance its services. 3. The reasons why you believe a partial refund is justified.
In some parts of the world, people hire trainers, rather than doing a team sport or neither exercise. The following paragraphs of this essay will discuss the reasons for this improvement, and whether, it is a positive development or a negative one. To begin with, society now has become more fitness conscious. Having a personal trainer has been proven effective rather than doing your exercises ...
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You recently attended a professional conference, and you were highly impressed by one of the guest speakers. Write a letter to the guest speaker expressing your appreciation for their presentation. In your letter, include: - Introduction: Explain who you are and why you are writing - Description: Describe what you enjoyed about the presentation - Impact: Explain how the presentation has benefited you or changed your perspective
Dear Mr. John, I am Mr. Hassani, one of the attending at the recent conference, which was held by the community. I am writing to you regarding your wonderful speech by which I impressed a lot. To be honest, your flawless presentation open a new life for me, and it changed my whole point of view of my current project, which is about the method of reducing the climate change issues. Your pers ...
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You recently purchased a product from a local store, but when you got home, you found that the product is damaged. Write a letter to the store manager regarding the issue. In your letter, include: - a description of the purchased product - the problems you encountered with the product - what actions you expect the store to take
Dear Sir or madam, I am writing this email regarding some problems that i encountered with the newley bought product from your shop. Actually i purchased the last model of Filips air fryer which is a black one with model number 020897. This model offers many features and can be customized in setting. It is also mentioned in the booklet that can be connected to Wifi. The main reason behind my p ...
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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel and you left your briefcase in one of the conference rooms. You called the hotel, but they were unable to locate it. Write a letter to the hotel manager explaining the situation. In your letter: - Provide details about the meeting and when it took place - Describe the briefcase and its contents - Explain the importance of the briefcase and request assistance in finding it
Hi Sir I had recently attended to a meeting in your Hotel. I noticed, when I left the Hotel, I forgot my Black leader briefcase which is very important to me. I appreciate you if you can find it as soon as possible. The meeting was in one of the spacious conference room which is located at the end of the corridor in the second floor of the Hotel, however, I could not remember the room's number ...
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You recently attended a job interview for a position you were excited about. However, you believe that the interviewer was unprofessional and the process was unfair. Write a letter to the company's manager to express your concerns. In your letter: - Describe the job interview and the position you applied for - Explain why you think the interviewer was unprofessional - Suggest what can be done to improve the interview process in the future
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope this email finds you well. Please be informed that I just had an interview with one of the staff there in you in your institute for English teaching position. I took about half an hour. She asked me several questions first that I tried to answer completely. But some questions were really irrelevant which I had hard time to answer and I was reluctant to answer. So I directl ...
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You recently purchased an item online, but when it arrived, you found that it was damaged. Write a letter to the company where you bought the item. Include the following in your letter: - Describe the item that you purchased - Explain the problem with the item - Suggest what you would like the company to do about the issue
Hello dear last week l bought phone as your company but unfortunatly it isnt functioning you know i cant conection to the internet and thats not possible to repair it couse of i dont have enough expert to do that but i think it will go back to setting now i want to production way for you to solve my problem: you can fix it and give me my own phone but i need it and you should do that urgency ...
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You recently purchased a product from a local store and discovered that it was damaged when you got home. Write a letter to the store manager to inform them about the situation. In your letter, include: - A description of the product you purchased - The issue you discovered upon opening the package - Your proposed solution to resolve the problem
Dear sir, I purchased an LED Tv from your store a few days ago. Unfortunately i didnot open the box till today. After unboxing we noticed the power isnot working. In fact it doesnt turn on . Since this product has gurrantee i expect you to examine and do something according to usual regulations. In advance i thank you for your attention. Please let me know what i should do now to fix the pro ...
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You recently attended a professional conference in another city and stayed at a hotel during the event. However, you faced some issues at the hotel which negatively affected your experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: 1. Describe the conference and your reason for staying at the hotel. 2. Explain the issues you faced during your stay. 3. Suggest possible improvements or compensation from the hotel.
Hi,I am one of user in your hotel and i have to in your city hotel because I have attend In professional conference and I chose here because it is close to the event location I had some problems during my stay at the hotel Unfortunately,the noise is very high and the movement of the hotel staff is very irregular In terms of food quality and variety,the conditions are not good I suggest you t ...
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You recently attended a conference and were impressed by the guest speaker. Write a letter to the event organizer to express your appreciation for the conference and, specifically, the guest speaker. In your letter: - Explain why you are writing the letter - Describe the impact of the guest speaker's presentation on you - Make suggestions for future conferences
Dear Sir, I'm expressing my gratitude and utmost appreciation for inviting me to this exhibition that have held in one of the most beautiful city on earth, Kuala Lumpur. This conference is the biggest event in the city. Many innovations and new technologies have been exhibited in here, showcasing their vision over the future tech might come the nearest. This exhibition has accommodated more t ...
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You recently visited a local sports center and were disappointed with the lack of services available. Write a letter to the center's manager to express your dissatisfaction, suggest improvements, and request a partial refund. In your letter, be sure to include: 1. A description of the situation and the issues you faced during your visit. 2. Specific suggestions on how the center can enhance its services. 3. The reasons why you believe a partial refund is justified.
The export value of kiwi from New Zealand to other countries from 2010 to 2012 is illustrated in the chart. Overall, it is easily seen that Japan is the largest market in New Zealand. In addition, over three years, saudi arabia sale value dropped significantly, while the four other country had the rising tendency In 2010, the exported kiwi sales to Japan hit the highest in five countries at 27 ...
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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family to celebrate your father's birthday. However, you were not satisfied with the food and services provided. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, describing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for your visit to the restaurant - Describe the issues you faced with the food and services - Suggest what improvements can be made to enhance the customer experience
Dear restaurant manager My name is Bao, and i hope you spent a little time reading my letter. I have visited and eaten at several restaurant in my counytryside, but the most disapointed restaurant that engrossed in my mind is your local restaurant where my house member celebrate a feast for my father'birthday. Overall, your restaurant actually has an affordable price and a stunning view. I wou ...