BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A COMPLAINT LETTER TO A HOTEL MANAGER | IELTS TASK – DISCONTENTMENT WITH HOTEL ACCOMMODATIONS AND SERVICES

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You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. However, you were not satisfied with the hotel accommodations and services. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, include: - Details about your stay (booking reference, dates, etc.) - What were the issues you faced during your stay? - What actions do you expect the hotel to take in response to your complaints?

Essay Sample

Hi, I'm Tien
I am writing this letter to complain about all the issues I had to cope with during my stay at your hotel. First of all is that the walls are too thin, I could hear clearly what the others were doing in the room next door. Not only that, the room was way too dirty when I first got into it, and I had to spend almost an hour just to make it be acceptable. Not to mention, the air conditioner didn't work well for me, even if the room is quite small, I still had to wait forever just to feel a little cooler. The last thing I want to tell you is about the lights, why would you put so many in such a small room, these hurt my eyes. After reading this, I hope you can fix all the problems above so that the others can have a nice trip around here. Please write a letter in response when everything is done, I will try staying at your hotel once again then.