In this page, you will find a variety of essay samples corresponding to the BAND 4.5 score. Use these essays as tools to learn, understand and evolve your own writing style for the IELTS examination.
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You recently attended a training course in a different city, and now you have received an email from the course provider asking for your feedback. The course provider is interested in understanding the positive aspects of the course, any areas of improvement, and your overall experience. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, include: - Details about the course you attended - What you enjoyed or found useful during the course - Suggestions for areas of improvement - Your overall experience and whether you would recommend the course to others.
Hi I regesterd my on english course , that course was about how we can improve our grammer skils , actually before that course , i had many problems about using grammatical points in my writings or my speaking skills , but gradually after five or seven session i got better , and i understood to grammatical pints in proper way , and in my oponion , the interesting part of our course was our t ...
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You recently attended a conference in a foreign country and left your suitcase at the event venue. Write a letter to the venue's manager to inform them about your lost suitcase. In your letter: - Describe your suitcase's appearance and contents - Explain where and when you last saw it - Request assistance in locating and returning the suitcase
hi dear manager i loose my suitcase in the event lobby and i cant talk with the lobby man because he don't speak English. my suitcase is big, blue and so expensive. its have very big and golden sides so everyone can see it easily. please call the lobby-man and ask him about my suitcase because i think he have it but he don't know how can get me. i am now in my hotel. its not much far from ther ...
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You recently received a package from an online shopping website that contained damaged items. Write a letter to the website's customer service department. In your letter: - Describe the items you purchased and the problem you discovered. - Explain how this problem has affected you. - State what action you would like the company to take in response to this issue.
Dear Sir I want writing is letter in regard last my order from your company. I have online bought a lot recently but I ordered white cat with green glasses and black eyes 2 weeks ago. My order received me yesterday but this doll is black cat with yellow glasses. I need to my order until 3 days later because this doll is my gift for little brother and he is love cat. On the other hand 3 days is ...
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You recently attended a conference in a different city and found that the accommodation provided by your company had several issues that negatively impacted your stay. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, include the following: 1. Introduce the purpose of your letter 2. Describe the issues you faced with the accommodation 3. Explain the effects of these problems on your experience at the conference 4. Suggest possible solutions or improvements for future events
Hi dear Smit I'm Math Damone which work in your company in sale section, as you know for getting promotion in every position of job you should participate in some course. In this case I attended in a conference in Chicago which far away of my home and have to stay here for tow nights. Unfortunately this Hotel that I'll stay in not appropriate for this issue. I spoke to the head of Hotel about ...
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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family to celebrate your father's birthday. However, you were not satisfied with the food and services provided. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, describing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for your visit to the restaurant - Describe the issues you faced with the food and services - Suggest what improvements can be made to enhance the customer experience
As cities become more congested, governments are seeking ways to discourage the use of private cars in city centers. Investment in public transport and education campaigns are two methods that can be used to achieve this goal. Education campaigns can be useful in highlighting the benefits of using public transport or walking instead of driving. They can also raise awareness of the negative im ...
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You recently attended a professional training course which you found extremely beneficial for your job. Write a letter to your manager to inform about the training and recommend it for your colleagues. In your letter, you should: - Describe the professional training course you attended - Explain how it has helped you with your job - Suggest sending your colleagues to the same training course
for 2 years ago, I did staff for a coffee shop, that coffee shop really crowded and famous. In start time, I feel so strange because owner coffee was deliver too works, I must do so many work as waiter, cleaning, and even cashier because lack of staff. That moment, I feel so tired but because high income and i tried work in a long time. Then, i asked for a new company and rather big. i so fun ...
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You recently attended a two-day training course organized by your company. The course was held at a different location, and you stayed in a hotel during the training. However, you faced several issues during your stay and the course. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: - Give details about the course you attended - Describe the problems you faced during the stay at the hotel - Suggest what improvements can be made for future courses
Hi,Mr boss I appreciate you for this course that you managed for us but I have some suggestions for you.first of all the place was too far and I wasn't comfortable so for the next time location is better to be near to the course .by the way course was absolutely good and I learned new things that I have never known anything about them.inthe way to return to the hotel the taxi or cars wasn't t ...
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You recently attended a conference in a different city and found the accommodation provided by your company unsatisfactory. Write a letter to your company's Human Resources department to inform them about the issue. In your letter: - Briefly describe your accommodation problem - Explain why the accommodation was unsatisfactory - Request for the company to address the issue and suggest possible solutions
Dear Sir I wanna talk to you about our domicile. We have a lot of work for congress in the city and we need to internet in all day. Definitely the boss respects us to do great job on a trip. This trip grave for our company and our future job. On the other hand this hotel is ancient on account of hotel’s employees don’t know about internet. Manager hotel is eldest and he can’t answer to my pro ...