BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: EXPRESSING DISSATISFACTION WITH ACCOMMODATION IN COURSE EXPERIENCE

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a training course in a different city, and you were not satisfied with the accommodation provided by the training institution. Write a letter to the course organizer to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, include the following: - Give details of the course you attended - Describe the problems with the accommodation - Suggest suitable solutions to improve the situation

Essay Sample

To whom who may concern

I am sajjad fadaei and I attended digital marketing course in chicago.
I learnt a lot but meanwhile I was not satisfied with the accommodation service . The air conditioner was broken and I was not able to rest well after the course.
Indeed it could be nice to check each room before our arrival.
I wanted to add that there is no enough space for storing our belongings. There is only a small closet which cannot be locked and inside was dirty when I got there. Add to other issues the noisy bed which does not let me sleep well during the night and I feel sleepy during the course. For getting the best result of the course please repair the bed and add more closets to the room.
However, I want to thank you for you patience and attention.
Best regards
Sajjad fadaei