BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: APPRECIATION LETTER FOR EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION WORKSHOP

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a workshop held by your company. In the workshop, a guest speaker gave an informative presentation about effective communication in the workplace. You have decided to write a letter of appreciation to the guest speaker. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and mention the workshop you attended - Explain what you learned during the presentation - Describe how the presentation has positively impacted your work and colleagues - Offer your heartfelt thanks to the guest speaker

Essay Sample

Dear Madam
I want to talk about workshop. First I should say thanks an ocean for workshop. I think the workshop very useful for us.
I started work since 8 years ago and I use to go to a lot of workshop for my progress and I guess it was good for my job.
Next I should say I learned a lot of thins in your workshop, for example: ways of sale, responsibility, creativity and so on.
The work shop had a lot of good effects for my job. Frankly speaking this workshop is reason success me. I can manage relationships with my coworkers and my customers.
I suppose workshop can be entertaining for employees. On the other hand employees can succeed with study about their job or attend the workshop.
Finally I am happy for attending in your workshop. I am looking forward to another your course.
Yours sinceraly