BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: EFFECTIVE APPRECIATION LETTER WRITING AFTER ATTENDING AN INTERNATIONAL WORKSHOP

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a workshop that was organized by an international company in your city. Write a letter to the company manager to express your gratitude for organizing the event. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and mention the details of the workshop - Explain what you enjoyed or learned during the workshop - Suggest any improvements for future workshops

Essay Sample

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform my appreciation for the event. It was really appropriate ad suitable for me. I am one of the participants and enjoyed your workshops very much. Firstly, I would like to tell you that I learnt many experiences from the event especially for my job and career as a teacher. I am very interested to attend it again and share my experience to my other colleagues. Furthermore, I am also interested to attend any possible workshops in the near future. I hope that I can gain much again from the other events to improve myself.

Finally, I want to thank your all teams for this event, hope that you could hold these workshops with different topics. I can also let my other friends to take part too. I also like to advice that the time be more until we can use it more and more.

Yours faithfully,
Abbas Hosseini