BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WORKSHOP APPRECIATION LETTER - PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT & IMPROVEMENT SUGGESTIONS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.0

You recently attended a professional development workshop in another city, which was organized by your company. Write a letter to the workshop organizer to express your appreciation for the event. In your letter: - Describe the workshop and how it was helpful to you - Mention one specific aspect of the event that impressed you the most - Suggest any improvements for future workshops

Essay Sample

Dear Mr. Lee

Firstly I'd like to thank you for the time you gave me to improve my capabilities, I always try to learn new things and find the ways that change my position in the work. I try to search in the websites and follow the pages which teach useful ways for better working on the social media. Therefore this workshop that I could speak to the people like me was an amazing time to find new friend and use their ethic sample in my way.
The opportunity to comment on the discussing items was most positive aspect of the event to me. I tried to hear their comments and write notes for the days after workshop to avoid forgetting these gold comments.
At the end I have some suggestions for future workshopes:
1- The number of attendants was really high and there was not enough time for all of them to share their comments.
2- If it is possible, inform the attendants 3 days in advance, so they can get ready for such a huge workshop.

Yours sincerely
Sdf