In this page, you will find a variety of essay samples corresponding to the BAND 6.5 score. Use these essays as tools to learn, understand and evolve your own writing style for the IELTS examination.
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You recently purchased a product online, but when it arrived, you found that the product did not match the description on the website. Write a letter to the online store's customer service department. In your letter: - Explain what you purchased and why it was unsatisfactory - Describe the differences between the product you received and the one described on the website - Request an appropriate solution to the issue (e.g., a replacement, refund, or exchange)
Dear Sir/Madam Hope you are doing well. My name is Mitra Dekal, I am writing to you regarding a recent online shopping that I had, on July 15th, 2023. I bought a pair of Petit pants from your online shop. I chose that product because of specifically the height of the pants, which I don't have to make any alterations. Unfortunately, when I have received them, the length of the pants was as ...
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You recently attended a professional training course which you found out to be ineffective and not up to the expected standards. Write a letter to the course organizer expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: - Describe the course you took and when you took it - Explain the issues you faced during the training - Suggest improvements that can be made for future courses
Dear Organizer, I am writing to you regarding the recent training course. The course supposed to be three days and disscussed about the newest agricultural equipment and methods. I took it last week on July 7th. Unfortunately, the course was initiated with a simple and basic ideas at the first day, without mentioning any equipment. similarly, the same approach was implemented in the next two ...
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You recently purchased a piece of electronic equipment from a local store. However, you discovered that the product does not work as advertised, and there are some issues with its functionality. Write a letter to the store manager informing them about the situation. In your letter: - Explain the product you purchased and when you bought it - Describe the issues you have encountered with the product - Request for an exchange or a refund for the faulty product
Dear Manager, I am writing to you regarding the Samsung, 7" screen size, odel A cellphone which I purchased from your department store last week on July 7th. I was about surfing on the internet two weeks ago, all of a sudden, I came across an amazing advertisement regarding the Samsung mobile company. It was describing unique features on one of its products such as its camera, as I mentioned ...
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You recently purchased a product online, but when it arrived, you found that it was not as described on the website. Write a letter to the online store's customer service department. In your letter, include: - A description of the product you ordered. - The issues you found when the product arrived. - What actions you would like the customer service department to take to resolve the issue.
Dear sir/madam I am writing to complain about poor quality of the latest version of your tv which I bought two weeks ago. After 1 day it was in use, display stopped working. I purchased it in the main branch which is located in the Central shopping center along a complete set of 3d-glasses. I was so happy to be able to watch 3D-movies. After being installed TV on the wall by your colleagues ...
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You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. Overall, you had a good experience, but there were a few issues with the hotel facilities. Write a letter to the hotel management to express your opinions about your stay. In your letter: - Describe the positive aspects of your stay - Explain the problems you faced with the hotel facilities - Suggest what improvements can be made to avoid these issues in the future
Hello. Its mohammadreza yazdanpanah. I stayed in your hotel for 5 days. As somone who travels a lot I can say that the overall experience was outstanding but there was a few problems with the quality of materials used in furniture. The pillows were too old and wasn't high enough so they made me have a little discomfort in the morning. The food was great but the items wasn't really diverse enou ...
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You recently received a letter from a friend who is looking to move to your city for work and has asked for your advice on finding a suitable place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain why you think your city is a good place for them to move - Suggest some areas in the city where they could find suitable housing - Share any additional tips or advice for their house-hunting process
Hi Jack I gald to hear that you are planning to move here, and I delighted. Here, is the most convenient place for you because the price of renting and buying a house is affordable. In addition, there are plenty of vacancies related to your competency, and I am sure you will find a job as soon as you arrive here, as I know about your conditions. As you know, this area where I bought a house ...
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You recently attended a conference in a foreign country and left your suitcase at the event venue. Write a letter to the venue's manager to inform them about your lost suitcase. In your letter: - Describe your suitcase's appearance and contents - Explain where and when you last saw it - Request assistance in locating and returning the suitcase
hello Mr. Apple, This is Viyana. I have lost my luggage in conference two weeks ago, in the last day of the conference.It was black and white in color and quite small in size. My suitcase has a long golden chain too. It contains some cosmetics, my iphone and some important documents such as my passport, driving license and my identification card. there is also in it. You can verify my name ...
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You recently visited a restaurant with your family for a special dinner but had an unpleasant experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, detailing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for the special dinner - Describe the issues you encountered during the visit - Suggest what the restaurant can do to improve its service and ensure such situations do not occur in the future.
Dear Manager of X Restaurant, I am writing to inform you about unreasonable and unacceptable unpleasant experience we had in your restaurant during last few days. We gathered in your restaurant for the purpose of celebrating birthday anniversary of my best friend Emma. We had great pleasant start with some drinks and salads. While we ordered the dinner, I noticed that waiter is started to hav ...
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You recently purchased a product from a local store, but when you got home, you found that the product is damaged. Write a letter to the store manager regarding the issue. In your letter, include: - a description of the purchased product - the problems you encountered with the product - what actions you expect the store to take
Hello Argos shopping centre manager Last day I've purchased a hairdryer from your shopping centre but unfortunately it seems it's spinning mood doesn't work. The model is Mz150 which has a whirling head for curling hear during drying process. Although it produced enough heat and worked fine in drying mood, it doesnt spinning. when I plugged it in and pushed the spinning buttom, it whirled f ...
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You recently attended a professional conference, and you were highly impressed by one of the guest speakers. Write a letter to the guest speaker expressing your appreciation for their presentation. In your letter, include: - Introduction: Explain who you are and why you are writing - Description: Describe what you enjoyed about the presentation - Impact: Explain how the presentation has benefited you or changed your perspective
Hi Mr, Bayat! I am writing this Email regarding your presentation. I was really impressed with your speech at the conference. It is obvious to me you are knowledgeable and have comprehensive information regarding that topic because I have already studied the topic. I know specific data and I am up to date about the subject. I need to mention that your presentation was valuable to me because I ...
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You recently attended a professional development workshop in another city, which was organized by your company. Write a letter to the workshop organizer to express your appreciation for the event. In your letter: - Describe the workshop and how it was helpful to you - Mention one specific aspect of the event that impressed you the most - Suggest any improvements for future workshops
Dear Manager, I would like to thank the organization for performing such a mandatory workshop. As I expected, the workshop was pertinent to my exact operational job; other than that, the precise date, time, and place of implementing the workshop was also flawless and convenient. Furthermore, since it was about how to use the Swaco panel in order to tackle the influx, it was a personally so be ...
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You recently attended a professional training course which you found out to be ineffective and not up to the expected standards. Write a letter to the course organizer expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: - Describe the course you took and when you took it - Explain the issues you faced during the training - Suggest improvements that can be made for future courses
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my last training course that I attended in you institute. The course was about construction management and was aimed to bring high-level of management skills for attendance. I registered for the course two months ago and enthusiastically had been waiting for it. Unfortunately, the subjects and material which had been chosen we ...
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You recently attended a conference in a different city and the organizing team had made arrangements for your accommodation during your stay. Overall, you were satisfied with their services, but you faced a few issues with your hotel room. Write a letter to the event manager of the conference. In your letter: - Explain the situation and the conference you attended - Describe the issues you faced with your accommodation - Suggest how they can improve the arrangements for future events
Dear manager, First of all, I would like to appreciate you for the great reception that I as a guest could enjoy, secondly, for organizing such a great event, I hope to return your favor someday.however, I would prefer to express some concerns I have had about my accommodation recently with you as the organizer. An issue I suffered a lot from, was the poor internet connection in my room ...
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You recently attended a professional development seminar, but you were not satisfied with the overall experience. Write a letter to the event organizer to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, include: - The seminar details (title, date, and location) - The issues you faced during the event - Suggestions for improvements for future seminars
Dear Organizer, I am writing to you regarding recent development seminar. On the name of "The latest Method to Mitigating Drilling Problem" performed on July 6th in the nearby city, Michigan. Having been attended in such professional seminar was grateful to me, but it was beyond my though. I mean, in spite of the title, which was ace, unfortunately, the whole content presented in the seminar ...
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You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend telling them about the move. In your letter, include: - The reason for your move - A brief description of your new apartment - An invitation to visit you
Dear Stacy, It has been a while since our last hang-out. How is your recent life? Are your children healthy and be nice to their parents? I am actually in an extraordinarily good mood these days due to the fact that I have finally decided to move to my new apartment. The reason why I moved out was because of my father, he was so strict in daily routine that I found it was hard to even breat ...