BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPOSING A DISSATISFACTION LETTER TO HOTEL MANAGEMENT - A GUIDE FOR IELTS TEST TAKERS

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You recently attended a professional conference in another city and stayed at a hotel during the event. However, you faced some issues at the hotel which negatively affected your experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: 1. Describe the conference and your reason for staying at the hotel. 2. Explain the issues you faced during your stay. 3. Suggest possible improvements or compensation from the hotel.

Essay Sample

Hi,I am one of user in your hotel and i have to in your city hotel because I have attend
In professional conference and
I chose here because it is close to the event location
I had some problems during my stay at the hotel
Unfortunately,the noise is very high and the movement of the hotel staff is very irregular
In terms of food quality and variety,the conditions are not good
I suggest you to make the staff travel as less as possible and coordinate and also increase the variety of food.
And please manage the lobby area more regularly so that when there is a large crowd, the noise does not disturb the peace and rest of others.
I don't want any damage from you,I just hope you take care of the problems because I might come back to this hotel for the conference
Thank you,Ihope you are successful