BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ADDRESSING CONFERENCE ROOM ISSUES FOR IMPROVED ATTENDEE EXPERIENCE

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 5.5

You recently attended a conference in another city and found out that the conference room had several issues affecting the experience of the attendees. Write a letter to the conference organizer, in which you: 1. Describe the conference you attended. 2. Explain the problems you faced in the conference room. 3. Suggest some improvements that can be made to enhance the conference experience for future events.

Essay Sample

Hello
I hope you have a good time.
To describe the conference, I should tell you that, it was about new psychological research which had been gotten popular by its results. Due to my experience about being a the conference room, Although the lecture was good but the environment wasn't actually satisfied. The air conditioner wasn't working well while the number of audiences were high. On the other hand, The light on the screen show was annoying in a way that nothing was seen on screen show. Besides, there were nobody in charge of these problems at the time.
For some improvement in the next conference, you can take a conference room which have these services by its own. Or be sure that these qualities and equipments previously has been cheked by workers because these things has high influence on audiences satisfaction and also their experiences and their descision for attending in following conferences.