BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: LETTER TO MANAGER ABOUT UNPROFESSIONAL JOB INTERVIEW EXPERIENCE & SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVEMENT

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 5.5

You recently attended a job interview for a position you were excited about. However, you believe that the interviewer was unprofessional and the process was unfair. Write a letter to the company's manager to express your concerns. In your letter: - Describe the job interview and the position you applied for - Explain why you think the interviewer was unprofessional - Suggest what can be done to improve the interview process in the future

Essay Sample

Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this email finds you well.
Please be informed that I just had an interview with one of the staff there in you in your institute for English teaching position. I took about half an hour. She asked me several questions first that I tried to answer completely. But some questions were really irrelevant which I had hard time to answer and I was reluctant to answer. So I directly asked her to change the question that I faced her anger and she suddenly stopped the interview.
With all due respect, you are kindly requested to take care of such problems, since these matters will make the interview difficult to proceed and unprofessional.
For having fair and professional interviews with applicants, please manage in a way that more professional and experienced interviewers be selected to avoid such chaos and confusion on interview process.
Thank you in advance for your kind attention.
Best regards,
Sarah