BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: UNHAPPY RESTAURANT VISIT EXPERIENCE | WRITING LETTER TO MANAGER FOR IMPROVEMENTS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 5.5

You recently visited a local restaurant with your family to celebrate your father's birthday. However, you were not satisfied with the food and services provided. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, describing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for your visit to the restaurant - Describe the issues you faced with the food and services - Suggest what improvements can be made to enhance the customer experience

Essay Sample

Dear restaurant manager
My name is Bao, and i hope you spent a little time reading my letter. I have visited and eaten at several restaurant in my counytryside, but the most disapointed restaurant that engrossed in my mind is your local restaurant where my house member celebrate a feast for my father'birthday. Overall, your restaurant actually has an affordable price and a stunning view. I would say that this is really a reasonable and renowable restaurant for eater who want to have meals in a romantic place. However, the limit of foods and bevarages in your restaurant is a significantly unfavourable point. Besides, the attitude of your staff is not really hospitable. There are some of my suggestion to enhance the customer experience for your restaurant. I think it a smart choice for your restaurant to increase the diverse and abundance of foods and drinks. Moverer, your restaurant may get plus point if you descorate your backyard and inside restaurant with colorful ornaments. These are some my feedbacks and idears to updarge your eatery, may be these can help you or not but it really greatful for me that i can help your restaurant.