BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: CRAFTING AN APPRECIATIVE LETTER TO A GUEST SPEAKER | PROFESSIONAL CONFERENCE PRESENTATION IMPACT

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a professional conference, and you were highly impressed by one of the guest speakers. Write a letter to the guest speaker expressing your appreciation for their presentation. In your letter, include: - Introduction: Explain who you are and why you are writing - Description: Describe what you enjoyed about the presentation - Impact: Explain how the presentation has benefited you or changed your perspective

Essay Sample

Hi Mr, Bayat!
I am writing this Email regarding your presentation. I was really impressed with your speech at the conference. It is obvious to me you are knowledgeable and have comprehensive information regarding that topic because I have already studied the topic. I know specific data and I am up to date about the subject.
I need to mention that your presentation was valuable to me because I could pay attention to more aspects and details that I have never thought about them. I am going to execute the project and my new knowledge and view will help me to do my project in a better way. In addition, I changed my mind about the way of processing my project and cut two of my steps and It will help me to save time and money. according to my new knowledge, I will finish the project in a better way.
Best regards.
Hediyeh