BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: REVIEW AND SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVING ACCOMMODATION SERVICES AT CONFERENCES

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a conference in a different city and the organizing team had made arrangements for your accommodation during your stay. Overall, you were satisfied with their services, but you faced a few issues with your hotel room. Write a letter to the event manager of the conference. In your letter: - Explain the situation and the conference you attended - Describe the issues you faced with your accommodation - Suggest how they can improve the arrangements for future events

Essay Sample

Dear manager,
First of all, I would like to appreciate you for the great reception that I as a guest could enjoy, secondly, for organizing such a great event, I hope to return your favor someday.however, I would prefer to express some concerns I have had about my accommodation recently with you as the organizer.
An issue I suffered a lot from, was the poor internet connection in my room and asking the receptionist to solve the problem didn’t work for me. I also had difficulty sleeping due to the uncomfortable bed I was provided with.the last but not least point that I would like to share with you was not being delivered the food, I had to go the hotel restaurant everytime for a meal which was quite tiring for me due to the far distance between my bedroom and the restaurant.
To make the long story short, here I want to thank you again and suggest you provide the rooms with a broad band and ask the hotel manager to consider changing the mattresses and pillows, also please ask the hotel manager to get the waiters to serve the food in rooms.
Regards,
MOHAMMAD