BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: RELOCATION EXPERIENCE AND INVITATION - DETAILED LETTER TO A FRIEND

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend telling them about the move. In your letter, include: - The reason for your move - A brief description of your new apartment - An invitation to visit you


Essay Sample

Dear Stacy,

It has been a while since our last hang-out. How is your recent life? Are your children healthy and be nice to their parents? I am actually in an extraordinarily good mood these days due to the fact that I have finally decided to move to my new apartment.

The reason why I moved out was because of my father, he was so strict in daily routine that I found it was hard to even breath under that roof. So, I have come to the decision of moving out. My new apartment is so beautiful. It is decorated with many species of plants, together with a lovely neighborhood.

I am moving in in next month, would you mind to come and give me a hand? It would be so appreciated and we can have a tea time together after the session. Call me if you decide to come.

Love you,
Hoc