BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: LETTER TO RESTAURANT MANAGER ABOUT UNPLEASANT DINING EXPERIENCE

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You recently visited a restaurant with your family for a special dinner but had an unpleasant experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, detailing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for the special dinner - Describe the issues you encountered during the visit - Suggest what the restaurant can do to improve its service and ensure such situations do not occur in the future.

Essay Sample

Dear Manager of X Restaurant,

I am writing to inform you about unreasonable and unacceptable unpleasant experience we had in your restaurant during last few days. We gathered in your restaurant for the purpose of celebrating birthday anniversary of my best friend Emma. We had great pleasant start with some drinks and salads. While we ordered the dinner, I noticed that waiter is started to have small talks with my friend which is only 19 years old and started the university recently. I took this manner as part of being social, and interaction that usually young ladies and young men may have. I noticed that this behavior of waiter has no end and he was trying to get mobile number of my friend while we were in the restaurant for dinner but not for the dating.
We managed to escape from this situation, by ordering some extra foods to the waiter.
I believe that such manner of the waiter was out of social norms, firstly because of the lack of respect for privacy, secondly because of lack of respect, thirdly because they broke the trust.
I believe that you may increase level of the services, if you learn to your family to respect other people's privacy.

Best regards,

Vahid