BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: FEEDBACK AND IMPROVEMENT SUGGESTIONS AFTER INEFFECTIVE PROFESSIONAL TRAINING COURSE

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a professional training course which you found out to be ineffective and not up to the expected standards. Write a letter to the course organizer expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: - Describe the course you took and when you took it - Explain the issues you faced during the training - Suggest improvements that can be made for future courses

Essay Sample

Dear Organizer,
I am writing to you regarding the recent training course. The course supposed to be three days and disscussed about the newest agricultural equipment and methods. I took it last week on July 7th.

Unfortunately, the course was initiated with a simple and basic ideas at the first day, without mentioning any equipment. similarly, the same approach was implemented in the next two days, and we did not learn something special. However, our expectation was beyond this basic topic. During the course, not only the problems with fertilizer and some chemical materials should have spoken, but the advance pertinent devices also could have argued.

apart from all that being said, I hope in the next upcoming training course all these related agricultural issues such as the newest chemical materials to combat the destructive flies as well as the latest method and tools for harvesting are introduced.
yours sincerely,
Mr. Hassani