BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: EFFECTIVE LETTER WRITING ON SUBSTANDARD PROFESSIONAL TRAINING

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a professional training course which you found out to be ineffective and not up to the expected standards. Write a letter to the course organizer expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: - Describe the course you took and when you took it - Explain the issues you faced during the training - Suggest improvements that can be made for future courses

Essay Sample

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about my last training course that I attended in you institute. The course was about construction management and was aimed to bring high-level of management skills for attendance. I registered for the course two months ago and enthusiastically had been waiting for it. Unfortunately, the subjects and material which had been chosen were old and not updated. Furthermore, the instructors were not resourceful and mostly could not answer to attendance's quarries. It had negatively affected the quality of the program. I believe this poor events would be bad for the institute reputation.
I strongly believe with this hectic pace of scientific developments you must keep your instructor up to date. More scientific materials can have more added value for this kind of programs.
I look forward to see how do you address this negative point. I look forward of hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Mojtaba Nosrati.