BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: APPRECIATION LETTER FOR PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT WORKSHOP - TIPS & GUIDELINES

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a professional development workshop in another city, which was organized by your company. Write a letter to the workshop organizer to express your appreciation for the event. In your letter: - Describe the workshop and how it was helpful to you - Mention one specific aspect of the event that impressed you the most - Suggest any improvements for future workshops

Essay Sample

Dear Manager,

I would like to thank the organization for performing such a mandatory workshop. As I expected, the workshop was pertinent to my exact operational job; other than that, the precise date, time, and place of implementing the workshop was also flawless and convenient. Furthermore, since it was about how to use the Swaco panel in order to tackle the influx, it was a personally so beneficial event.

Working with the most cutting- age appliances, for instance, the Swaco panel, expressed me the most. Because all of the previous workshops presented non-related pieces of equipment and were old-fashioned, they were not practical for any staff who worked on the rigs.

I hope such workshops are more performed in the upcoming future and are utilizing the most related and state-of-the-art appliances in order to meet the staff's needs. That would boost the whole efficiency of the company.

yours sincerely,
Bakhtiar Hassni