BAND 7.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: PROS AND CONS OF INCREASING RETIREMENT AGE - IMPACTS ON INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY

Nowadays, more and more countries have been increasing the age of retirement. While there are still some drawbacks of this trend, I believe that this is a necessary move for our society. On the one hand, the rise in the age of retirement will certainly result in a rise in the average age of employees, which does in many ways impact how the work is done. The reason for this is that the older one gets, the harder it is for that person to move his or her body according to his or her will. For example, a 60-year-old bus driver won't have the reflex needed to fully control the vehicle in a dangerous situation. On the other hand, the benefit that this trend can bring about is enormous. The first point is that older will obviously have more experience compared to the young ones. Since they are more used to the work, they can have things done more efficiently. Another point is that having to work will make the elder feel better about themselves. This is due to the feeling of having things done on their own, they can pay for their own need and not put any burden on their children. For example, an elder who still has to go to work will never feel bored or left aside since they have their own work to do. With all the reasons above, I totally believe that the rise in the age of retirement is what our society need. In conclusion, though there are still some drawbacks from this trend that need to be dealt with, raising the retirement age is necessary for both the elder and our society.