BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: BALANCING GOVERNMENT, PRIVATE, AND CORPORATE FUNDING FOR ARTS AND CULTURE GROWTH

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Some people believe that the government should provide financial assistance to musicians, artists, and other creative individuals to encourage cultural growth. Others argue that this support should come from other sources, such as private or corporate funding. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay Sample

I want to talk about supporting people that they have different talent. I imagine those who have expertise can help to show our culture to another country.
Some work are very important for showing culture for example: art, music, dance and so on.
Some people think government should help people’s creative and this helping is very fine for growing culture. In my view regarding this point is right. I suppose government can have good effect in growing culture.
Encourage of government can make a lot of goal for people. Every body need to supporter and definitely government is best choice for supporting especially with bailouts because any person need to peace for working.
On the other hand some people believe subscription should be from another source. For instance: campaigns, companies, rich person and so on.
In my view different group can to help for growing country with showing culture.
There are a lot of ways for developing. We can research about ways and continue ways.
All people are effective in growing their culture.
Some people know about advertising or playing musical instrument or singing and so on.
Generally I think every body try to growing culture because it is very important for country future even children future since children have a right to know old culture.
Otherwise government is in charge regarding develop and supports plan for growing culture.
I think culture is mesmerizing because any country has a special culture. There are a lot of culture in different country and knowing there is very exciting for us.