BAND 8.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: DISCOVER MY NEW APARTMENT MOVE - REASONS, DESCRIPTION & INVITATION

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 8.5

You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend telling them about the move. In your letter, include: - The reason for your move - A brief description of your new apartment - An invitation to visit you

Essay Sample

Dear Ashley,
I hope you are in the pink of your health. Do you recall this apartment I told you about a few weeks back? Well, guess what I finally took the brave decision and moved into it. While it sounds crazy because of the ridiculous ask, I had my reasons to shift.
Firstly, the apartment is in close proximity to my office so it is much easier to commute back and forth. Not only the location is magnificent, but also it is quite spacious and comfortable.
Let me tell you more about the place, it is a 2-bedroom apartment with huge balconies and a modular kitchen. Apart from this, the living room has a home theatre installed which is just awesome to watch movies on. Additionally, it is equipped with high-tech security systems, thus the place is impenetrable.
With that being said, let's catch up soon! I'm dying to show you my new place.

See you soon.

Best Wishes,
Adam Sandler