BAND 7.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING AN APPRECIATION LETTER TO CONFERENCE ORGANIZERS - KEY POINTS & SUGGESTIONS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 7.5

You recently attended a conference organized by a well-known company in your field. The conference was informative, and you had a great experience. Now, you would like to express your gratitude and appreciation to the organizers. Write a letter to the conference organizer. In your letter: - Thank them for organizing the conference - Describe what you found particularly useful and enjoyable - Suggest any improvements that could be made for future conferences

Essay Sample

Dear Peter,
I am writing to thank you for the fantabulous environmental conference which was held 5th of July 2023.

I would like to thank you a lot for the endeavors and efforts you made. That was great work and I had never participated in such an awesome conference. Also, your company's reputation made this conference unique and everyone was impressed.

I found this conference beneficial because of a wide variety of reasons. Firstly, there was enormous proved information about the environment and its problems. In addition, the company tried to explain long-sight approaches towards every single trouble and encourage people to use them in their lives to have a better situation in the future.

I would like to suggest some improvements to have a better conference in the future. I was wondering if you could provide some information and evidence about the detrimental effects of fossil fuels as well as the important role of solar energy in our lives.
I hope that you will address these concerns at the next conference.
yours Sincerely,
Mehran Nikravan