BAND 7.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A LETTER ON IMPROVING CONFERENCE EXPERIENCE - ISSUES & SOLUTIONS

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You recently attended a conference in another city and found out that the conference room had several issues affecting the experience of the attendees. Write a letter to the conference organizer, in which you: 1. Describe the conference you attended. 2. Explain the problems you faced in the conference room. 3. Suggest some improvements that can be made to enhance the conference experience for future events.

Essay Sample

Dear Organizer,
I'm writing this mail to you to inform you about some issues relating to the meeting room we have used for the past conference.
Firstly, one of the biggest problem with big room is that there should be a microphone for the speaker to use, gladly your boardroom had one, however it seems to be broken as we can not turn it on or connect it to the amplifier. I suggest you have better preparation for your guess and do regular facility checks.
Secondly, there was some issue with the screen, the projector and the screen did not line up properly, we had to fix it ourself so it consumed a large amount of time. The screen had some scrath marks that cause us some trouble with reading the contents of our presentation. As i have mentioned above, you should do weekly or even daiky facility check to ensure the quality of your equipments.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours truly, Khue.