BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK LETTER TO A HOTEL MANAGEMENT - DETAILED EXPLAINER

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a conference in another city and stayed at a hotel. Overall, you had a good experience, but there were a few issues with the hotel facilities. Write a letter to the hotel management to express your opinions about your stay. In your letter: - Describe the positive aspects of your stay - Explain the problems you faced with the hotel facilities - Suggest what improvements can be made to avoid these issues in the future

Essay Sample

Hello. Its mohammadreza yazdanpanah. I stayed in your hotel for 5 days. As somone who travels a lot I can say that the overall experience was outstanding but there was a few problems with the quality of materials used in furniture. The pillows were too old and wasn't high enough so they made me have a little discomfort in the morning. The food was great but the items wasn't really diverse enough if you're vegan. I think a little improvement in the food diversity could make the geusts experience quiet better. The air conditioning wasn't working all the time but it wasn't a big deal afterall. The positive sides however was too bright and its not possible for me to mention all of them here so i can give you a few examples. The staff were amazing. They were extremely kind and punctual so if someone asks them for help they won't disappoint them. The foods were quiet healthy because the chef knew how to do his job properly. The room was also very quiet and comfortable. I would recommend this hotel to my coworkers whenever someone wants to take a visit to this city. Thanks a lot