BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: LETTER OF DISSATISFACTION ON PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT SEMINAR EXPERIENCE

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 6.5

You recently attended a professional development seminar, but you were not satisfied with the overall experience. Write a letter to the event organizer to express your dissatisfaction. In your letter, include: - The seminar details (title, date, and location) - The issues you faced during the event - Suggestions for improvements for future seminars

Essay Sample

Dear Organizer,
I am writing to you regarding recent development seminar. On the name of "The latest Method to Mitigating Drilling Problem" performed on July 6th in the nearby city, Michigan.

Having been attended in such professional seminar was grateful to me, but it was beyond my though. I mean, in spite of the title, which was ace, unfortunately, the whole content presented in the seminar was irrelevant to the topic. In addition, everyone expected, including me, the presenter talked about the current problem we have on the rigs,such as heavy loss mud, sticking drill strings and the worst one blowout the well, and defined some cutting-edge related appliances to lesson the mentioned problems.

Apart from all that being said, I,personally,expected and requested the organizer considering cited issue in the upcoming meetings and focused more on beneficial, related and state-of-the-art equipment. Because the previous seminar was really basic and was beyond our expectations.

yours sincerely,
Mr. Hasani