BAND 5.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A COMPLAINT LETTER TO RESTAURANT MANAGER FOR UNPLEASANT DINING EXPERIENCE

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You recently visited a restaurant with your family for a special dinner but had an unpleasant experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager, detailing your experience. In your letter: - Explain the reason for the special dinner - Describe the issues you encountered during the visit - Suggest what the restaurant can do to improve its service and ensure such situations do not occur in the future.

Essay Sample

Hummm hello . I'm a fluence has an unpleasant experience in your restaurant . Maybe you don't know more problem in your restauran such as server , items or food . I don't like vegetable in my specia dinner , it doesn't delicious and fresh . Fruits don't clean and has decorate pretty . Beside my family has 5 members but server has only bring to us 4 dinnerware set . I feel unpleasant about it . Next , the table where my family sit in don't clean and we call a server many times but she don't hear and she can't understand to explain for us . So is a restaurant manager you must teach for servers many things about clien and inprove anything . In the future i maybe comback to your restaurant and hope you can exchange . Thank you listening and wish restaurant will develop .