BAND 5.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: DISCOVER MY NEW APARTMENT MOVE - REASONS & INVITATION FOR A VISIT

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 5.0

You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend telling them about the move. In your letter, include: - The reason for your move - A brief description of your new apartment - An invitation to visit you

Essay Sample

hi there i have just moved to a new apartment where i wish lived there.This apartment is very wonderful,the bathroom is clean and big,I interested in wash.The apartment have a library because i adore reading book.The apartment give me feels comfortable.I enjoy living a new apartment more than my old house.This apartment have many thing new a blanket, a fright,a dish washes,a bed, light, a fan.This apartment have equitment more mordern than my old house. I have never seen apartment beutiful than my apartment before.This apartment have a view where i can see sight a city moutain.I can't image how a view wonderful.The dresscode in a new apartment is black white,the apartment give me feels luxury and ancient.My chair and table very nice,it's made by grandfather because my grandfather is a architect.I love my grandfather so much and my grandfather too.I enjoy in my new apartment where i will live.