BAND 5.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ARTICULATING CONCERNS ABOUT UNPROFESSIONAL JOB INTERVIEW PROCESS

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 5.0

You recently attended a job interview for a position you were excited about. However, you believe that the interviewer was unprofessional and the process was unfair. Write a letter to the company's manager to express your concerns. In your letter: - Describe the job interview and the position you applied for - Explain why you think the interviewer was unprofessional - Suggest what can be done to improve the interview process in the future

Essay Sample

Hi
I had applied for a position that you suggested. As i love searching and learning new thing, i was excited about this job. But during the enterview session, i felt the interviewee didn't really seek for an researchers! She only focused on my social skills as if looking forward for a receptionist and i thing it isn't fair. you should notice on some others skills such as motivation and researchable attitude if you need ptofessional experts. I'm afraid I'm not and an extroverted person with any interest in social activities. But if you want to find a motivate clerk at you company, I'm the one you can choice. After all i'll enjoy to get this job and i'll try to do my best. You had better to change your concerns about this position to earn best result. In the end I appreciate your efforts to help all of us