BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: WRITING A COMPLAINT LETTER ABOUT TRAINING COURSE & HOTEL STAY PROBLEMS

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You recently attended a two-day training course organized by your company. The course was held at a different location, and you stayed in a hotel during the training. However, you faced several issues during your stay and the course. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: - Give details about the course you attended - Describe the problems you faced during the stay at the hotel - Suggest what improvements can be made for future courses

Essay Sample

Hi,Mr boss
I appreciate you for this course that you managed for us but I have some suggestions for you.first of all the place was too far and I wasn't comfortable so for the next time location is better to be near to the course .by the way course was absolutely good and I learned new things that I have never known anything about them.inthe way to return to the hotel the taxi or cars wasn't there and I am sorry to say that but I stayed there for more than 2 hours for returning to the hotel and that was ridiculous.some strange peoples were there that I have never ever met them so my second suggestion is that you plan meeting for people that would be in such courses. The food and hotel was good but they don't pay attention to the guests. And I think it isn't interesting.