BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: UNSATISFACTORY ACCOMMODATION ISSUE & SOLUTIONS - LETTER TO HR DEPARTMENT

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 4.5

You recently attended a conference in a different city and found the accommodation provided by your company unsatisfactory. Write a letter to your company's Human Resources department to inform them about the issue. In your letter: - Briefly describe your accommodation problem - Explain why the accommodation was unsatisfactory - Request for the company to address the issue and suggest possible solutions

Essay Sample

Dear Sir
I wanna talk to you about our domicile.
We have a lot of work for congress in the city and we need to internet in all day. Definitely the boss respects us to do great job on a trip. This trip grave for our company and our future job.
On the other hand this hotel is ancient on account of hotel’s employees don’t know about internet. Manager hotel is eldest and he can’t answer to my problems.
We tried many time solve issue. Also we searched about this when we had internet in out hotel. Foe instance when we went to in cafe or restaurent.
In my view that we can change hotel or we purchase a new internets modem for some days.
Otherwise I don’t know about your budget for doing my point.
Overall I hope you can solve the problem very soon. I am looking forward to your suggestion.
Thanks an ocean
Gol