BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: REVIEW AND FEEDBACK ON TRAINING COURSE - IMPROVEMENTS, EXPERIENCE, AND RECOMMENDATION

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 4.5

You recently attended a training course in a different city, and now you have received an email from the course provider asking for your feedback. The course provider is interested in understanding the positive aspects of the course, any areas of improvement, and your overall experience. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, include: - Details about the course you attended - What you enjoyed or found useful during the course - Suggestions for areas of improvement - Your overall experience and whether you would recommend the course to others.

Essay Sample

Hi
I regesterd my on english course , that course was about how we can improve our grammer skils , actually before that course , i had many problems about using grammatical points in my writings or my speaking skills , but gradually after five or seven session i got better , and i understood to grammatical pints in proper way , and in my oponion , the interesting part of our course was our teachers , because they were really patient and commitment . About the course facilities , it could be better , beacause we hadn't enough viasual and auditory equipments for all students , and maybe it has bad effects on the institution educational methds , but thoroughly it was a helpful course , and i can see it productivity in my engliah , and of course I recommed this kinds of course to my frindes and relatives .