BAND 4.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ADVANTAGES OF PROFESSIONAL TRAINING COURSE FOR JOB ENHANCEMENT & COLLEAGUE RECOMMENDATION

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 4.5

You recently attended a professional training course which you found extremely beneficial for your job. Write a letter to your manager to inform about the training and recommend it for your colleagues. In your letter, you should: - Describe the professional training course you attended - Explain how it has helped you with your job - Suggest sending your colleagues to the same training course

Essay Sample

for 2 years ago, I did staff for a coffee shop, that coffee shop really crowded and famous. In start time, I feel so strange because owner coffee was deliver too works, I must do so many work as waiter, cleaning, and even cashier because lack of staff. That moment, I feel so tired but because high income and i tried work in a long time. Then, i asked for a new company and rather big. i so fun this new work and proud. I arranged do cashier's bank. This works fit me and rather lightly, and special higher income than before works. When i works, really everything is new than imagine and i feel before work is a lot of help. I knew how to using a computer, many working operation is rather fast, i get on well with people in company rather rapid, this work did me rather confident