BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: URBAN ENVIRONMENTAL ISSUES AND MIGRATION TO RURAL AREAS - A COMPREHENSIVE DISCUSSION

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In many countries, the quality of life in urban areas is deteriorating due to various environmental problems. Some people argue that the only solution to these issues is for individuals to move away from cities and start living in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Essay Sample

Nowadays some people argue about the facilities of urban lives is decreased and we should stay and solving the environmental problems or people have to immigrate to rural area so the population of cities is decreased and enhance environment reparing.
I'm my opinion, reversed immigration is not good solutions for this phenomenon because if people continue their habits caused more destroy events for rural environment therfore in a long-time destroying is carried. For example; if people use fossils fuels for heating causes carbon dioxide distribution in the air so face to air pollution in rural areas. On the other hand, the most carriers depends on urban lifestyles and people can't continue these roles in rural communities. For example marketing material and social networks needs to urban lifestyle and can not surviving in rural territories.
I suppose that, when people use command environmental damage and and compensate the past environmental issues can develop the quality of life in urban areas. As a solution they can search for alternative power instead of fossils fuels for heating. For example use sunlight panels.Furthermore people can expanded public transportation so with these measures they enhance decrease air pollution. In the same time fortunately after COVID-19 pandemic companies investigated the remote works can make lower cost for their busines so nowadays they prefer remote works to in-site carriers because they can control the power usage. Finally, we should think outside of box and improve quality of life with search about solutions for inviromental issues management.
In conclusion, improvement quality of urban lifestyles depends on the solutions which humans implement in theirs routine and reverse immigration to rural communities cannot solve environmental problems so for long term the best way for survival is compensation environmental issues.