BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: DISCUSSING RETIREMENT AGE INCREASE AND PENSION SYSTEM STABILITY

Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced? Although using games in early ages or even in elderly have some benefits for keep you motivate and help people to be creative, In recent years, with developing the technology and gaming industry, scientific research shows a significant effect of online and offline games on young generation health by overusing of these games, such as their mental and physical conditions. Given that with developing the Technology, the game and entertainment industry had a amazing change by time, and looking for more customers, the young generation are important target for using and testing these games. So, it is predictable that the most long-term effects of using these games include teenagers as well. Since most of these games probably are online and needs to sit and using a computer or a smart television, it could be expected children experience some desise and health issues, such as obesity, eye problem, anxiety and probably being unsocialize by time. For instance, maybe they will tend to eat more fast food, spend more time in home without any activity or exercise, being by their own in their room, instead of doing outdoor activity with their parents and friends. Moreover, some of these games may show violence, which have a strong effect on the mental health and make the teenagers more anxious undoubtedly, leading them to the depression in long_term. However, despite some advantage which could be consider for gaming during some certain ages, for example, raisins creativity in kids under 8, or even keep the brain activity in elderly, maybe the entertainment industry needs some regulation and strict rules for games content and the range of ages that suppose to use these games. In addition, parental controls on children activity could be another solution in some cases, while they try to spend more time with their teenagers on outdoor activity. Also, inform young generation about the backwards of some games which shows huge amount of violence science and how these games could influence their mental health, would be another useful solution. In addition, in my opinion government and mayers can establish some facilities and game centers for families and young people to experience some of these interesting games out of the screen, for instance, paint_ball centers or some activities like these, which help people to have fun and experience raising adrenalin at the same time. In conclusion, although gaming have uncountable advantage in many cases, albeit ther is no doubt being busy with computer games in long term and with hight hour sitting front of screen, specially in children and adolescents, huge amount of physical and mental issues and problems are not unexpected. Authorizing the rules for entertainment industry and build some game center in one hand, and more parental control on children activity and try to be attend in outdoor activity with them, on the other hand may be the example of some good solution for having more healthy future generations.