BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: TECHNOLOGY'S IMPACT ON COMMUNICATION EFFECTIVENESS AND IMPROVEMENT

Presence of zoos in today’s world has been a vexed issue. In other words, it is assumed by many individuals that existence of such places may arise problems and their closure is a far better option. With regard to the fact that such places lead to dire consequences, there are some viable proposition to zoos. Unfortunately, more and more animals are captured so as to both entertain and educate the public. Since animals are capable of feeling both pleasure and pain, they have the right to live in their own natural habitats and this way of capturing for the purpose of exhibiting them to visitors is inhumane. Furthermore, there would be a faint possibility of wandering around the nature and this can be a predominant factor in their rights’ violation. Not only in terms of their freedom but also their lifespan. Owing to the fact that these living creatures are held in confinement, they can experience shorter existence. In fact, if they lived freely, duration of their lives would be extended. A series of measures can be adopted to alleviate the problem. To begin with, substituting wildlife sanctuaries for zoos can be a long-term solution. Not only do these natural parks provide animals with favorable conditions, but they also promotes their longevity. To elucidate, these living creatures can experience liberty and this results in the extension of their lives. Moreover, TV channels, namely NatGeoWild, Animal planet and Epic Wildlife can be one of the obvious answers. In fact, one can satisfy his/her urge to see living things by television broadcasts and animals can inhabit the natural world. In this case, the government should invest money in improvements of these channels so as to supply people with more videos and pictures of animals. To conclude, keeping animals in zoos result in grave repercussions mentioned above and is a brutal activity. Nevertheless, this issue will be addressed by provision of natural places such as wildlife refuges and investment in betterment of TV channels.