BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: DISCUSSING REMOTE WORK PROS AND CONS IN THE TECHNOLOGICAL ERA

While in the past most university goers interested in science-related subjects in many countries, these days it is become more and more common to choose other majores. This essay will outline some possible reasons for this, as well as shortage of medical specialist force it may be lead. Recently, since many majors except science subjects have lost their popularity among students, the governments doing eye-catching advertised for enrollment in other subjects like art. As a result, the level of students’ interest increased significantly. On the other hand, science subjects are a little bit more complicated than others, and to learn these fields of study students need to be diligent and patient, while these days, in many countries, students are more sluggish because of being facilities and technology they can doing own tasks just with push a button. So, they prefer to choose those subjects that can graduate early and enter the job market. When we face mass alumni in non-science majors, they maybe have heavy competition with many people to get jobs, but just a few people can have suitable jobs like accountants in a good company. Therefore, those people who cannot access their favorite job are more likely to suffer from depression or anxiety in the long run. As well as, society's need for science fields such as medicine is increasing day by day. As a result of the lack of doctors and researchers, the possibility of treating patients and scientific research in society decreases. So, in order to compensate for this shortage, the authorities of the countries must spend money and bring a professional workforce to their own country which requires many facilities. For example, until the last few decades, Indian specialist doctors were working in all parts of my country, which caused financial losses for our society. In conclusion, encouraging students to go to other disciplines and being science more difficult leads to students are unwilling to science courses. Thus, can be have significant adverse effect on society.