BAND 5.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: UNPACKING THE IMPLICATIONS AND POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS FOR RISING AVERAGE AGE POPULATION

Nowadays, there are two different group with different sides that in first side, they think species of planets and animals are in danger and the other side, they consider about there are environmental problems. In my side, the environment and the earth are in danger situation. In first side, by passing of each year from existence moment of earth planet until now, there were several different species of plants and animals that became extinct because of hunt and lack of enough food or unexpected happening. For example, the hunter with increasing hunting to showoff their brave quality caused there are not rhino white anymore in this planet, furthermore some species becoming extinction because of drought and lack of enough food for each group that try to survive during the day. In the second view, the people consider about there are more important environmental problems such as a melting ice or lack of enough water and even increasing amount of sun shining of sun caused to brings growth of heating that the animals becoming extinction. Melting the ice of north and south pole, It is dangerous for every one because it appearances growth of water level that brings tsunami, moreover the increasing of heating caused by destroying lot of group of animals or even humans. In conclusion, environmental problems should be on the first point that every one have to pay their attention to that and have to consider about to how find solution for protect more the earth, because our survival and the existence of each group depends on earth planet that is our first and mutual home.