BAND 7.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYSIS AND COMPARISON OF CANADIAN WORKFORCE PERCENTAGES IN MAJOR INDUSTRIES (1850 VS 2020)

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The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The bar char illustrates the proportions of Canadian workers in five different industries in the years 1850 and 2020.
Overall, Manufacturing and Services are the two major fields that Canadian employees are working in in both years, whereas other three industries weren't in favor of labor society.

In 1850 Manufacturing, Services and Agriculture/Fishing are the three most demanding areas for people of Canada to work with 36%, 33% and 22% respectively. In this year other industries like constructions and energy/water are two low demanding industries with 5% and 3% respectively. In 2020 the people who work in Manufacturing decreased dramatically to 9% but in stark contrast workers in Services increased to 81% which is the most demanding industry in 2020. Employees who work in Agriculture/Fishing business falls to 1% which is significant decrease since 19850. Also the Energy/Water industries has the same condition in 2020. Construction industries experience a slight increase in workforce from 5% in 1850 to 8% in 2020.