BAND 7.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: PROJECTIONS FOR GLOBAL PRODUCTION SECTOR-WISE FOR 2040 & 2060

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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


Essay Sample

The supplied pie charts illustrate a comparison between the prediction of worldwide production in 2040 and 2060.
Overall, it is immediately apparent that in both 2040 and 2060 the major parts of the charts will dedicate to the services and manufacturing sectors.
With respect to the services and manufacturing sectors, which will have bar far the highest share, services sector will remain unchanged from 2040 to 2060 at nearly 40%. The same pattern will be considered for manufacturing sector and there will be a negligible increase from 31% in 2040 to 22% in 2060.
Turning to the Info-Com Tech sector, its share will be around half of those of the manufacturing, and this figure will remain stable over the period. the energy, agriculture, and material sectors will possess the lowest amount of the pie chart. The energy sector will witness a decrease of 2% throughout the period. Similarly, there will be a 3% decrease in the proportion of the agriculture sector. However, the figure of the material sector will see a marginal rise by the end of the project's period.