BAND 7.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS OF ANNUAL EARNINGS OF CALGARY BAKERIES 2000-2010

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The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The supplied line graph illustrates the information about the income earned by three bakeries which are located in Calgary in a 10-year period from 2000 to 2010 and is measured in dollars.
Overall, It is immediately apparent that, except for Mari Bakeshop which had a downward trend, the annual revenue of Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery was increased over the period as a whole.
With regard to Mari Bakeshop which had an erratic pattern, in 2000, this bakery's income stood at just over 80000$ which was the highest income of the year among others. After the fluctuations over the project's period this baker finished the project at 40000$ which was the lowest income in 2010.
Turning to Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery which experienced less fluctuations, at the beginning of the project Amandine Bakery experienced around three times as high as Bolo Cakery's income. Then, both shops revenue increased slightly and they finished the project at nearly 60000$ for Bolo Cakery and just over 100000$ for Amandine Bakery. Amandine income in 2010 was the highest income throughout the project among all members.