BAND 7.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYZING AVERAGE DAILY SALES OF FOOD ITEMS AT BRISK CAFÉ BY SEASON

All General Writing Task 1 Samples / Band 7.0

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The supplied bar graph illustrates the comparison between the average daily income of the Brisk Café in five different food items during winter and summer.
Overall, it is immediately apparent that while the consumption of food products keeping people warm such as hot coffee and soup are more favorable, in hot season people prefer to buy something that helps them to deal with hot weather such as ice cream and ice coffee.
With regard to hot coffee and soup, which are much more popular during winter, the number of hot coffee served during winter is more than two times as popular as the number which is served in the summer. The soup also has a similar pattern, and the number of sold soups will increase from nearly 25 in summer to 50 in winter.
Turning to iced coffee and ice cream, the popular items of the summer, the number of iced coffee consumers will witness a forty-fold increase in summer and reach from nearly zero in winter to almost 40 in summer. With the same pattern, there will be a rise of 10 in the number of ice cream buyers in summer and the figure will jump from nearly 25 in winter to 35 in summer. For salad, the buyers number will remain the same over these to seasons.