BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: PARTICIPANT TRENDS IN OLYMPIC GAMES HISTORY

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The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart and the line graph above provide statistics on the human who attended the Olympics since it began over a period of 88 years from 1924. In general, the number of male and female participants were rising up during the research time.
Regarding the male and female candidates, after 88 years the figures increased significantly ( male: approximately 3000 to 6000, the female: from nearly 0 to 5500), the chart shows the comparable figure, however, the man data was growing up steadily, while the women statistic was rocketed dramatically.
In terms of the number participants, from 1924 to 1984, the figure was growing up stably( 3900- 6500 candidates), then between 1984 and 2012), it started rising up rapidly reach the top of around 11000 participants.
To summarize, the amount of male participants who have attended to the Olympics after 88 years have gone up gradually, while the female participants after 60 years rose up stably, after that, rocketed in the last 28 years.