BAND 6.5 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYZING PROJECTIONS FOR GLOBAL PRODUCTION BY SECTOR IN 2040 AND 2060

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The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

according to the charts the projections and global productions by sector in 2040 and 2060 are demonstrated.

as it clearly seen, the most projected production by section in each two different years is sevices,which in 2060 is 1 percent higher in comparison to 2040.Second production is manufacturing,which in 2040 is 31 percent while in 2060 is 33 percent.the next production,which almost equal in both two years is info-com tech.in 2040, as you can see the lowest prodution, which projected, is materials;in contrast, in 2060 the lowest projected production is agricluture by 1 percent while this production in 2040 is predicted to 4 percent.and as it shown, the last production by sector is energy,which is predicted it will have a slightly decrease by 7 percent to 5 percent.eventually, the charts show that three of the most productions by sector,which is services, manufacturing and info-com tech, increased considerably in 2060 rather 2040.

in conclusion, you can see that the most projection for global production by sectors in both years will be services, which represent that it could be very substantial for our productions in the future.