BAND 6.0 IELTS ESSAY SAMPLE: ANALYZING SURVEY RESULTS ON REASONS FOR MOVING TO A CAPITAL CITY

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The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay Sample

The line chart illustrates data, extracted from a questionnaire regarding the people's initiatives for migrating toward the the capital city of the given country, between 2000 to 2015. Overall, the employment and study experienced a steep rise, while the family/Friend and adventure slightly increased in the same time interval.
Turning to the chart, he employment and study almost doubled from 200 to 2005, and met reached approximately 90000 and 50000, respectively. On the other hand, the family/friend and adventure reasons remained constant in the same window, kept the value of roughly more than 10000.
Between 2005 and 2010, the family/Friend been more popular and faced a considerable increment by reaching from 10000 to more than 20000, while ad adventure maintained its trend. At the same time, the employment and study had an increment but with less slope and increased in the margin of 10000. In the end, study had an abrupt growth from 2010 to 2015 and the ultimate value almost tripled respecting to its initial value of 25000. In contrast to the study, employment was not appeal to the hordes of the people and declined almost a tenth. The family/friend and adventure, had no particular fluctuation in the same period and rest on a little more than 20000 and 10000, respectively.